Dripping Pipes

Glen0000 on Mar 26, 2010

Tags: blood, dripping, Expression, expressive, Poetry, Rain, views

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Poetry.

Cold, Hard, Chair

slipping… slipping…

Wet, Brown, Hair

Dripping… Dripping…

as the pipes gush as dark as night,

the chill of the wind pursuses me,

like a glass jar breaking,

Cutting me as i am taken aback,

The DRIPPING sound renews me.

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Comments (5)

Jack on Mar 26, 2010
For a starting poet you are pretty good…!
rhys on Mar 26, 2010
very touching. really conveying the lost hope of the protagonist and his loss of life. I can really feel his hardship great poem. I hope to hear more of you Glen
Tim on Mar 26, 2010
the title makes no connection too the poem???
Mr. X on Mar 26, 2010
Rubbish Lame get a new Job…
karl king on Mar 29, 2010
i liked it

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