My brain mis-fires even in the best of times. Luckily, I have learned to adjust and realize the feeling is fleeting.

Drive thru, drive thru the valley del sol,

Past the Palms singing in rhyme.

Warmth filling body and all,

Mind mending from troubled times

Tall peaks surround the joyous drive,

Snow capped future like that which left.

Hot dry air to succumb,

The cold and bitter from whence I come.

Red convertible speeds along,

Top folded back where it belongs.

Readout is faster than that posted,

Smile is bigger, heart so boasted.

Twist and turns as height is gained,

No rails or safety net to contain.

From ear to ear is a grin,

Tires squeal and start to spin.

For some a fright,

Is this driver’s delight.

Today by self, none to faint,

So for now no restraint.

Passing others that stand still,

While they obey the numbers will.

Open throttle, leaded sole,

Roadside passes, like vision stole.

As summit nears,

A willful glee.

Now to return without fear,

United now, nature and me.

Decent is quick,

Almost surreal,

Maintain wit,

Less nothing to feel.

Soar pass ledges at edge of road,

Car and soul lighten their load.

Next turn has drop off into abyss,

Attention to detail, nothing to miss.

A misfires occurs,

In the grey engine bay,

My thought loses focus, blurs,

Obscures reason to stay.

Partial seizures grips my thoughts,

Changes mood in a second lost.

Nothing matters, love or bought,

Brain malfunctions at all cost.

No longer pleasure this drive of mine,

Now a fight for life over brain’s misfire.

Curve approaching with cliff to dine,

On this auto and occupant, such desire.

Pain courses battered mind,

Speed beyond what physics deed.

Images flash of what they’ll find,

Wreckage, carnage, body freed.

Rest from this earth’s tenacious glue,

Mind tells me to let go.

Peace ahead: fly into the blue,

Soar up to the start of snow.

A battle fought in mental mode,

Seizures grip will not dwell.

Focus now far down the road,

This is no place to say farewell.

With mighty force the wheel does turn,

While I’m quiet, tires screech.

Gravel flies, rubber burns.

Car looms over thousands of feet.

Drive thru this time,

Drive thru this pain.

Some other place, this times not mine,

Drive thru, drive thru to gain.

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Other works by Clay (should you get bored and need something to read!)

WaveGoodbye

Raven’s Rest

The Watch

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  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 21, 2009

    Wow! What a powerful and emotional poem. I travelled with you along that road. You really made it come alive. I am so glad you drove through at the end.

    Christine

  • nutuba on Mar 21, 2009

    Great imagery Clay, I could feel the wind whipping through my hair as the car hurtles down the road.

  • C Jordan on Mar 21, 2009

    Excellent work Clay

  • James DeVere on Mar 21, 2009

    Pass Me The Bong! j

  • Lostash on Mar 21, 2009

    Splendid Clay…why do I imagine this to be a Corvette convertible?

  • rutherfranc on Mar 21, 2009

    what a way to describe the pain in life that you are going through and speaking of it as driver`s adventure on the road.. very nice!

  • Bo Russo on Mar 21, 2009

    Clay, I loved every word of this,and the video as well.Qiute a diverse change from the kitty one.I really.I never even thought of it as an analogy of life till RF said that,if that was the hidden meaning all I can say is >> Brilliant.

  • macon on Mar 22, 2009

    very good work. i feel like singing when i was reading this. as if i was actually driving..

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 22, 2009

    Excellent, great imagery, great video to go with it, you brought your feelings to life in such an original way.

  • KevDob on Mar 22, 2009

    I like this very much, I would also invite you to read my poetry…let me know what you think :)

  • Bick Parker on Mar 23, 2009

    Kind’ve like a little story in it’s own right. Nice one.

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Mar 24, 2009

    This is fleeting. The piece traveled to many areas of the mind as did the video. This is well put together. I like it. Very moving and motivational. E

  • MrZebra84 on Mar 29, 2009

    You capture the essence of a road trip very well and use beautiful language. Excellent piece.

  • Resounding Glass on Apr 1, 2009

    Another excellent poem. I really liked how you had the video accompanying it.

    Thanks,

    -Resounding Glass

  • Jeffrey B. Merrow on Apr 20, 2009

    well done this is a great piece of work I will look for more from you great job

  • Katien on May 2, 2009

    Very powerful poem.

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