A poem about dropping the snacks to lose weight.

Put down the cookies
and step away
Forget about the chocolate
and look the other way

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Don’t eat that!
Do you know the calories?
If you want to lose the pounds,
You must forget about the goodies

No more sweet cherry pies
 On Sunday afternoons
Forget about snacking late at night
While watching those two A.M. cartoons

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Remember if you want to lose a couple of pounds,
You must remember to stand your ground
Cut out calories and exercise some
That is how you get the job done!

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  • papaleng on Mar 9, 2009

    a very informative poem, girls should be conscious about their figure.

  • Michael Degenhardt on Mar 9, 2009

    That sounds like great advice, but cookies, cakes and pies are my weakness, especially after the kids go to bed LOL Excellent write. Michael

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 9, 2009

    Fun poem, brought a big smile to my face! All I want to do after seeing those photos is go and eat chocolate!

  • Peter Cimino on Mar 9, 2009

    Very cool! Yeah, I’m a sucker for a good cookie and some ice cream every time! Well done.

  • Tarra Buluran on Mar 9, 2009

    Well-expressed poem. I’m one of those who finds hard time cutting out my intake of calories. Nice article!

  • C. Jordan on Mar 9, 2009

    Nicely done and a good idea to put in some photos.

  • Debra Mann on Mar 10, 2009

    Excellent advice! With obesity on the rise and all!

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 10, 2009

    Did you write that especally for me? LOL. I shall try to follow your advice though it isn’t easy. Great work.

    Christine

  • macon on Mar 10, 2009

    i liked it! a fresh new topic for a poem! and a very good advice too!

  • nutuba on Mar 10, 2009

    Nicely done! I loved the flow and feel, but now you’ve gotten me so hungry! :-)

  • Yovita Siswati on Mar 12, 2009

    Fun to read and so true. Have to put down the snacks!

  • S A JOHNSON on Mar 21, 2009

    lol I really liked reading it…It is very true and honest but it totally made me want to go buy some cookies! ^_^

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