Falling from heaven.

Dewdrops
  Upon soft petals
     Glistening in the sunlight

Water-drops
   Upon jade stalk
      Shimmering in the moonlight   

Raindrops
   Upon tender leaves
       Sparkling in the morning

Snowdrops
   Upon silken stem
      Glittering in the evening

Droplets
   Gently raining
       Scattering majestically

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  • papaleng on Apr 11, 2009

    wow! this a novel way of writing a poem. I love it.

  • Shirley Shuler on Apr 11, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, Droplets, simply beautiful!!

  • maranatha on Apr 14, 2009

    Such attention to detail, the rhythm, the spacing, adds to the simple beauty. Really, really nice. It feels like raindrops….I never would have thought of such a thing.

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