Drops (Haiku Series)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 15, 2009

Tags: drops, Haiku, Japanese, nature

6

Haiku- each verse of 5-7-5 syllables.

sprinkled drops of rain

falls over the rose petals

set of gleaming pearls.

========================

dew drops moistening

the ground on a chilled morning,

moisturizing thoughts.

========================

tear drops from her eyes

dripping on the hard bottom

rejected diamonds.

3
Liked it

Comments (6)

Hansika on Nov 15, 2009
i dono wt really haiku is….but still i love it…very nice
wonder on Nov 15, 2009
Very dainty and fragile, good ones.
Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 15, 2009
Beautifully presented, Priyanka.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 15, 2009
Nice work..Priyanka……
Sue Nuckles on Nov 16, 2009
Well done
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jan 5, 2010
oh this was a really lovely poem. the words were so subtle and soft, just like the raindrops themselves. very very beautifully expressed.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading

Categories