Drunkard

mdrkarim7 on Feb 16, 2012

Tags: Alcohol intoxication, beer, Drunk, whisky, wine

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This short poem is the feeling of a drunkard.

Head I take Beer-

Tail I take whisky-

If the coin stand straight?

I take wine;

What if it hanging in the air-

forever-

I take none-

Am I already done!

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AliAhmad on Feb 16, 2012
hmm attractive..
aheed411 on Feb 16, 2012
Very nice
Amante de la historia on Feb 16, 2012
good info, share again
Safa on Feb 16, 2012
very nice poem. beautiful picture
ebasearticles on Feb 16, 2012
nice shared
Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 16, 2012
Great share:)
golden boy on Feb 16, 2012
simple poem but great…thanks for sharing
avissado on Feb 16, 2012
cool and cheers
Eliza26 on Feb 16, 2012
Very interesting piece. I don’t know if that was your intention, but I find it quite tragic.
Ruby Hawk on Feb 16, 2012
A neat poem, I would take the wine without throwing the coin.
Martin Kloess on Feb 16, 2012
I’d say
erwinkennythomas on Feb 16, 2012
should get sober
rgreenfield on Feb 16, 2012
you just want to drink… go get some… not too much!
ittech on Feb 17, 2012
A pretty good and informative article.
nita kusuma dewi on Feb 18, 2012
nice aricle
ittech on Feb 18, 2012
thanks for share
ittech on Feb 19, 2012
You’ve smashed it again.
mdrkarim7 on Feb 25, 2012
Thanks friends.

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