Broken mirror and enemy…

The mirror is bad

It appears to be broken

My sworn enemy

II

In my reflection

My enemy is fatness

I hate my mirror

III

This broken mirror

Has become my enemy

I am too ugly

IV

Broken mirrors suck

They are my arch enemy

I hate my mirror

Bo Jack there is no substitute

Haiku for you

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  • Petalm on Nov 9, 2009

    I like it!

  • Themax on Nov 9, 2009

    Thanks Bo,Very nice ,Love it :)

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 9, 2009

    Great one for the challenge!

  • LovelyWolf on Nov 9, 2009

    Isn’t looking into a broken mirror bad luck? Lol, great haikus, makes me wanna change that man in the mirror into something better :D

  • Karen Gross on Nov 9, 2009

    Don’t sweat it Bo – broken mirrors always add 20 lb.

  • Duff D Moss on Nov 9, 2009

    Hah – mirrors are no friend of mine either brother. Fun write dude. Thanks for playing.

  • Brenda Nelson on Nov 9, 2009

    I have no full length mirrors in my house although as a rule Iike my body better than my face, even seeing my triond picture freaks me out. I really need a better picture, or better retouching skills…
    is the mirror the enemy, or our own opinions?

  • Hansika on Nov 10, 2009

    thanks for the share

  • maranatha on Nov 10, 2009

    Without your reflection you would not be complete.
    Your worst critic would not be around to compete.
    Mirror broken, perhaps, a truer tale doth relate,
    for fragments and pieces a different whole can thus make.

  • Svetlana Cherevik on Nov 15, 2009

    an interesting piece!

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