The saga continues…

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 Many ways to run, 

I think my way is bad.

I didn’t see the raccoon ,

in the roadway it was sad.

 The mice and bird stop chasing me ,

at least I thought they had.

One raccoon with birds  and mice,

are chasing me,” real mad “

And then I fell into a whole

filled with thick black mud .

Those chasing me, ran right by,

then someone said ,”hello bud “

Though not the end ,I’ll stop for now,

this unforgettable tail .

The voice I heard ,was coming from ,

a one foot five pound snail.

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  • F J McCarthy on Mar 1, 2009

    very amusing read.

  • Morgana on Mar 1, 2009

    LOl What a sight there . It’s as if I’m watching cartoons, very well done , David.

  • rutherfranc on Mar 1, 2009

    this is turning into a zoo.. wonder what`s up next? really enjoyable..

  • Lee Altman on Mar 1, 2009

    This was cool

  • Likha on Mar 2, 2009

    Good work. Fun and entertaining.

  • Annie Hintsala on Mar 2, 2009

    Good run! Can’t wait for the next one!

  • DA Cournean on Jul 4, 2009

    Those are the little buggers who like to eat my zucchini. Will you came and shoot them for me?

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