Holiday makers visit the sand dunes of Tunisia, hungry to drink in the experience.

On the opposite dune they played,
Silhouetted by the long low sun,
Occasional distant sparks of unknown origin
Sporadically coming into union,
The would-be Jedi’s thrashing their imaginary lightsabers.
Departing the camels we climb
Two by two
Ascending the dunes
as each new group arrives they expand like some hungry plague
a different dune top for each group,
a new unexplained island
fresh, plush, free from imprints
prime photo op.

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  • mdegenhardt on Oct 6, 2008

    Because of your details and flowing words one can read and actually be there as well, witnessing and being a part. Very well written. Michael

  • jo oliver on Oct 6, 2008

    Good job

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 7, 2008

    Good poem! Keep it up!

  • tracy sardelli on Oct 8, 2008

    Great poem, thank you.

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