Poem: Dwelling on the past, don’t let keep you from moving forward!

        Ocean waves

                        March across my back

        Lot I carry

                        Dwells and attacks

       

        Sand spears my knees

                        Hands raised high

        Pray for a mission

                        Spirited reply

 

        Should have, could have,

                        Wish I did

        Seagulls plead,

                        To measure the Lord’s bid

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Comments (6)
  • grandpatom on Nov 7, 2011

    Very powerful poem.

  • ladym33 on Nov 7, 2011

    I am very happy to see something new by you. Very intense poem. Nice job!!

  • realityspeaks on Nov 10, 2011

    Very enigmatic

  • grandpatom on Nov 16, 2011

    Stopping by again.

  • ladym33 on Nov 18, 2011

    Happy Birthday!

  • thedaddym on Mar 14, 2012

    Nice work here.

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