A poem about someone drinking too much.

Thoughts swirl

Till I can’t think

What to do

Have a drink

Still unsure

I just don’t know

Another drink

Might stop the flow

Thoughts emotions

Just cannot deal

Another drink

So I won’t feel

Drink some more

The bottle’s gone

Need another

Feels wrong

Down the road

Store’s open

Hit something

Someone’s broken

Sirens flair

Bars clink

Long time now

Before another drink

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  • Jeffrey B. Merrow on Jun 5, 2009

    fantastic and wrote with flair. I like it. I look forward to more of this wonderful exsperience of your writes. Emotions are conveyed well.

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