Ease Mind

ceegirl on Jan 19, 2010

Tags: bees, deed, fees, mind at ease, need

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Keep the mind at ease.

I try to keep your mind at ease

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You swum over me like bees

I’m the one who pay the fees

I try to do a good deed

You act like you don’t need but

I’m the one who keep your mind at ease.

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Comments (37)

neverloggedin on Jan 19, 2010
Lovely piece!
Mythili Kannan on Jan 19, 2010
Thats a great positive thinking ceegirl
Will Dee on Jan 19, 2010
I agree. Sometimes the one we are comfortable with we take for granted. Nice piece.
ken bultman on Jan 19, 2010
Sometimes you do and don’t get did back to.
T. S. Lewis on Jan 19, 2010
Peacefulness is a wonderful thing
Neva Flores on Jan 19, 2010
so sweet……I love it!
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 19, 2010
very seaful

cee you

have u read my

au revoir

for all
Night Story on Jan 19, 2010
Very nice.
upeshdaa on Jan 19, 2010
very fine presentation.
alc on Jan 19, 2010
This spoke to me! Thanks for the share!
Atanacio on Jan 19, 2010
nice love the flow
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 19, 2010
Yet we have another brillent composure by Ceegirl and one that speaks volumes with a strong meaningful message. As you reach for your pen and the ink starts to flow, you gain lots more readers and I want you to know. Each word that I read coming from you, touches me softly and comforts me too. You are a great writer with a mighty pen, and you leave your audience all with a grin. Wonderful Piece Ceegirl…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
Sharif Ishnin on Jan 19, 2010
The annoyed and the annoying one at ease.:)
Jenny Heart on Jan 19, 2010
Well done!
johnnydod on Jan 19, 2010
lol short and sweet
Sourav on Jan 19, 2010
Nice
coffeeadict on Jan 19, 2010
That’s a very nice piece.
yes me on Jan 19, 2010
nice one Cee girl
bailieman on Jan 19, 2010
You have set yourself a difficult task, trying to keep the mind of another at ease.
8Shei8 on Jan 19, 2010
You go Ceegirl
diamondpoet on Jan 19, 2010
Interesting piece, and we should all find what it is that puts us at ease.
alensmith on Jan 19, 2010
great post and well writen.and thanks for your commet also in my post.
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 19, 2010
SECOND READ WAS MUCH BETTER AT EASE
Videomark on Jan 19, 2010
We have been there.
GreenSunshine on Jan 20, 2010
Short and sweet. Like a fun-size candy-bar.
VTech on Jan 20, 2010
Thanks for nice article
Frances Lawrence on Jan 20, 2010
Sometimes we try our best but our support is not recognised.
vickymathan on Jan 20, 2010
great one..
Darla Cooke on Jan 20, 2010
Very good poem.
richardpeeej on Jan 20, 2010
Hi Ceegirl -you can’t beat a bit of ease and taking it easy- I am all for that my friend!
albert1jemi on Jan 20, 2010
beautiful one
qasimdharamsy on Jan 20, 2010
Nice one….
JMPK89 on Jan 21, 2010
Bit of ease would be nice for me. Soothing poem Ceegirl.

– JM
Snooky on Jan 21, 2010
absolutely beautiful
Vikram Chhabra on Jan 22, 2010
Very beautifully said in a succinct way!
BonesOfTheDamned on Jan 22, 2010
Wow, I know if that were sent to me it would stop and make me think!
Tina Cassello on Jan 23, 2010
With the exception of words misspelled or grammatically incorrect, this was good. Your message gets across.

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