A poem about the many ways we choose to eat dirt or have it force fed to us.

Sometimes it feels good to eat dirt.

You’re laughing, saying help yourself,

“All the mud pie in the world right

beneath your feet, just scoop, taste.”

You’re thinking age two, mama’s not watching.

What is it? Throw it a bit. Taste it.

Not bad and not good but the worms

that come later don’t feel so good.

It feels good to eat dirt, when you’re on a bike

rolling down the road. Sometimes bugs,

sometimes billowing dust clouds sail behind

racing out, motor screaming, hitting the road.

Sometimes when you have to eat the worst dirt,

dirt about yourself, by those who hate,

it feels good to chaw down like your teeth

become the death of the world, devouring it up

then spitting it out with nonchalance

having tasted nothing of any worth at all.

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Comments (6)
  • rdzemo on Jan 11, 2012

    So realistic. Great read.

  • rubysexy on Jan 11, 2012

    Nice share to consider.

  • Socorro Lawas on Jan 12, 2012

    Sometimes we bow in defeat— eat dirt. The point is to cleanse the mouth after that.

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 13, 2012

    I’m not to keen on eating dirt, do kids really at mud pis. EWWWW!

  • olatokunbo on Jan 20, 2012

    sometimes the dirt others try to make you eat is theirs,really nice poem though.

  • Ririenz on Jan 21, 2012

    Thank you for this poem .. I want to simple conclusion. If I dirt I take a bath .. LoL :)

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