Ebony Amulet and Chaos

Darla Cooke on Jul 2, 2010

Tags: chaos, Ebony Amulet, writing challenge

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A poem for Duff’s writing challenge.

The ebony amulet you gave me,

brought only chaos to my life.

It filled my days with sorrow,

all my nights with much strife.

We argued, fussed and fought,

harsh words were thrown around.

I slung the ebony amulet far away,

since then it’s never been found.

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Comments (14)

Starpisces on Jul 2, 2010
well expressed on the anger.
Milton H Peebles III on Jul 2, 2010
Nice reading
Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
Goodselfme on Jul 3, 2010
Well penned.Thank you.
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jul 4, 2010
a very intense and well written poem
Butterfly Musings on Jul 5, 2010
A great poem!! love it!!
CA Johnson on Jul 5, 2010
This is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
RS Wing on Jul 5, 2010
He probably had some really bad karma. Cool poem for the challenge, Darla. Hopefully, know one will find it!
Katie Marie on Jul 6, 2010
Great narrative poetry, Darla.
Spiritt on Jul 7, 2010
Oh What a cursed cursed object. heheh Good one.
Cebah on Jul 7, 2010
Good one for the challenge!
Belinda Dobie on Jul 7, 2010
Good one.
Duff D Moss on Jul 8, 2010
Then some other poor kid picked it up and the strife followed them. How unkind

So far it seems these ebony amulets have cause nothing but trouble

Thanks again for playing. The challenge is not complete without a Darla poem.
BradONeill on Jul 9, 2010
good work darla i have a feeling it wasnt the amulet so much as the giver.
maranatha on Jul 26, 2010
Darla, this short piece tells a long tale.

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