When we can only see the big picture from the edge.

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As I walk along the edge of the valley

I can see many house and farms below

It spring time with plenty wild flowers all around

The song birds are putting on a show

 

Image by StuSeeger via Flickr

 

I can see the distant plain

All arrange in the creator design

The wind, trees and clean fresh air

As I walk along the edge of the valley

 

Kids are playing out in the fields

While their parents are hard at work

To walk and observe is such a thrill

I feel wonderful in the morning chill

 

I walk for miles some days

Each one an adventure I must say

As I walk and observed along the way

I hope that this walk would last away

 

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  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Feb 16, 2010

    Very lovely poem.

  • lillyrose on Feb 16, 2010

    Really nice. I love to walk and observe too, caught up in my thoughts!

  • Michael Eboh on Feb 16, 2010

    So calm a lovely poem.

    GREAT SHARE INDEED!

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 16, 2010

    great work….

  • albert1jemi on Feb 16, 2010

    great share

  • Snooky on Feb 16, 2010

    Don’t you ever want to stop and build a foundation some day?

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