Edges of Pain

heidiefernandez on Aug 15, 2010

Tags: anguish, heal, last breath, letting go, pain, wounded heart

The pain of letting go.

Edges of Pain

As I see you sigh with Pain

Far down in my vein

The agony you try to hide

So strong these eyes can find

You conceal the anguish

But feeling it makes me vanquish

Holding your hands

Feel you into my arms

No words can express

How much I wanted to repress

Those hurting you feel

Those wounded heart

I wanted to heal

The thorns in my soul

Deeply sitting until I fall

Dawn into dusk by your side

Masked the fear I have inside

Last drop of hope into my leaf

Those last breath from your lips….

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Christine Ramsay on Aug 15, 2010
A very passionate and beautiful piece.

Christine
JoeLopy on Aug 15, 2010
Excellent. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you.
papaleng on Aug 15, 2010
Wow! that was deep and intense Heidie. muntik na akong mahulog sa chair ko.
flowerrose on Aug 15, 2010
Nice poem.
William Worthington Bakerfield Chesterton Pea on Aug 15, 2010
i once lost a goldfish, the hurt was as such as your poem
PARAM on Aug 15, 2010
Lovely poem.
wonder on Aug 15, 2010
Passionate, a great entry.
GodsGrace on Aug 15, 2010
Wonderful poem
LoveDoctor on Aug 15, 2010
Lovely and heartfelt. The thorns in my soul. I like the imagery.
Likha on Aug 15, 2010
Gosh, I remember my late father in this poem. So moving!
Jimmy Shilaho on Aug 15, 2010
Great expression.
livemike on Aug 15, 2010
Great poetry…
yes me on Aug 15, 2010
A nice write this cheers
Joseph Scott on Aug 15, 2010
Lovely poem, good job!
Joie Schmidt on Aug 15, 2010
So beautiful……..*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
nobert soloria bermosa on Aug 15, 2010
full of love and emotion…
Lipstick on Aug 15, 2010
a sad but beautiful poem from a very talented filipina
Eldridge on Aug 16, 2010
Simply great. I can feel the intensity deep inside in heart, and your poem beautifully expose on how some men can close their heart instinctively in means of what it is to be human.
Anj M on Aug 16, 2010
Wow beautiful.
Phoenix Montoya on Aug 16, 2010
So beautiful and very touching…
suhail on Aug 16, 2010
another nice read
1hopefulman on Aug 16, 2010
Filled with beautiful expressions.
giftarist on Aug 16, 2010
Such well penned piece. Great!
carissimi on Aug 18, 2010
beautiful, intense but beautiful

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