Terror in the cemetery.

 

It was raining hard and very windy,

bright lightning was flashing everywhere.

I stood outside shuddering from the chill,

on that cold and stormy autumn night.

I cautiously entered the eerie cemetery,

hearing scary whispers on the breeze.

As the violent storm raged on that night,

I heard chains rattling in the distance.

I was not prepared for the sudden terror

when the undead rose and began to walk. 

I could feel their evil eyes on my back,

as I quickly ran out of the cemetery.

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Comments (6)
  • cardy on Jan 27, 2009

    fab! work I could feel your fear.

  • Westbrook on Jan 27, 2009

    You are scaring me..

  • denus on Jan 27, 2009

    very scary when its dark here.

  • CLEBLANC on Jan 27, 2009

    PRETTY SCARY. I LIKED IT.

  • Elvin Dilone on Jan 28, 2009

    wow u can really narrate a scene. Scary

  • Johnny Yuma on Jan 29, 2009

    Great work Darla! I truly enjoyed this piece.
    Johnny Yuma

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