Ego:makes Us One

Baijayanti Pradhan on Apr 29, 2011

In the relationship between husband and wife to feel proud of each of other, makes a long lasting…

It’s our ego who makes us one

one diameter with two radius,

we always feel proud of spouse

spouse, mine is only for me.

***

He is the potential energy

energy within me is kinetic,

as a whole we are one

one object with mechanical energy.

***

We are one nose

nose with two nostrils,

one thing makes us one

one thing that is called ego.

- The End -

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Comments (13)

FX777222999 on Apr 30, 2011
Nice poem my friend!
sanataryal on Apr 30, 2011
Simply the best. I enjoyed reading your poem.
galore on May 1, 2011
nice read, thanks for sharing
UncleSammy on May 1, 2011
Nice Share
R K Vajpeyi on May 1, 2011
Lovely! Liked the novelty of it!!
Tulan on May 1, 2011
nicely done,
Dreamy777 on May 2, 2011
great one
payaltyagi on May 6, 2011
its nice
Cassle Tang on May 11, 2011
That’s what I think as unique! I like how you linked it to nose and nostrils.
CA Johnson on May 13, 2011
I really enjoyed your poem.
priyadarshani on May 14, 2011
good poetry skills, try to read my articles and comment
LCM Linda on Jun 17, 2011
Being one is really sweet, but not many couples can do that.
shibashish mohanty on Feb 2, 2012
Wowwwwwwwwwwwww

Hi there!