Electron’s Love Poem

Antonette Ramos on Mar 13, 2009

I poem about the love of an electron to a proton……

Oh, proton, how can I express this feeling?

We’re exactly opposite, yet I can’t stop believing

That someday, we could neutralize

And forever, I’ll be seeing your eyes

To love you is my greatest task

Kindly give what I ask

Give me a chance and show me a sign

We’re meant for each other, be mine

My mass will not be complete without you

I need you in this life, that’s true

Come on, just a sign, my dear

And our fate will be crystal clear!

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Comments (4)

AmskyDC on Mar 13, 2009
It is funny you put these two atoms in a poem. No one thinks about doing this. Very creative…keep it up!
OhSugar on Mar 16, 2009
Your romantic poem was very nicely done. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
mannyrich on Mar 21, 2009
Wow! what a unique poetry. you are a very clever student because you can apply in real life what you have learned inside the classroom and the application is very original. Good work.
Elizabeth Abbott on Mar 31, 2009
I love it! The ions do too! LOL

Hi there!