Embracing Storm

Arthur Spanial on Mar 4, 2010

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Here’s a haiku that I wrote about my parents. Tell me what you think please, and on a side note, this took me literally five minute to write.

Embracing Storm

Stormy, glass of waves

Call of lark and tiger, luna

Steely, warm, mercy

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Butterfly Dreaming on Mar 5, 2010
This is a very original poem that has pleasing contrasts and vivid imagery. I liked reading it Arthur, keep up the great work!
Arthur Spanial on Mar 5, 2010
Thanks, I think I might work on a small collection of different types of poems and publish them later. Thanks for the positive feedback!
c romero on Mar 9, 2010
glass of waves?
i don’t understand
did u mean
waves of glass.

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