A poem of love and comfort and redemption.

Her gorgeous green eyes,

Made him feel special for once in his life.

For once he had worth.

 

For once he had a place to go.

A place of comfort and satisfaction.

 

He felt safe and secure in her green eyes.

Where he was finally cherished.

 

Looking up he cannot help but stare.

Thoughts racing.

 

Her eyes like a lush forest,

Into which he wishes to travel.

 

Sparkling like an emerald,

And sweeter than a grannysmith apple.

 

So like herself.

Her pleasant disposition.

 

With her he feels at ease.

Bad memories shoved behind.

 

A new life begins,

In her gorgeous green eyes.

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Comments (3)
  • Joseph on Jan 7, 2011

    I really like the style you used to write this! It flows in a way that\’s really nice for the content. :) Great Job!

  • Chae on Jan 7, 2011

    Ooooh. Beautiful. :D

  • Kim Seabrook on Jan 26, 2011

    Gets better every time I read it, like all good poetry does. It is what makes it eternal. Reminds me of the dreams I once had.

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