Loss of words when the mind is also empty.

Love is the soul of charm shoots,
and if the shoots were not created in an instant,
he will not be created for years or even generations.

And echoed by the silence,
And repeated by dreams and shadows,
And understood by love,
And sealed by the awareness day
And sung by the soul of the night.

carving the sky with wishful thinking
carving night with the shadows
Do not just sit quietly
You will be greeted by a night without a word.

This song is a love song

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  • Dreamy777 on Mar 18, 2011

    great share

  • megamatt09 on Mar 18, 2011

    Very good work, thank you for sharing.

  • atta muhammad on Mar 18, 2011

    great post

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 18, 2011

    good one

  • dbanheh on Mar 18, 2011

    so well written!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 18, 2011

    never keep your mind empty
    fill it perpetually
    with love and joy
    think positively always
    then only can one life enjoy
    carve out a niche
    on the earth
    not in the sky
    clouds simply pass by ,
    the land
    the desert
    the snow
    the sea
    always my friend shall
    stand by you and me
    so be happy
    let the tsunamis and earthq
    uakes come and go
    we still have our own time
    each one
    you ought to know.

  • sanataryal on Mar 18, 2011

    Excellent poetry.Thanks, Foxpete88

  • Antonello on Mar 18, 2011

    i like it so much

  • FX777222999 on Mar 18, 2011

    Good imagery and liked the lines.

  • galore on Mar 19, 2011

    nice read

  • Lynxer on Mar 19, 2011

    good one

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 19, 2011

    yeah and i zerooed in and wrote so many more have u read some

  • youthinksokiddo on Mar 19, 2011

    mysterious and enchanting

  • MarianaIoana on Mar 22, 2011

    great share

  • Lynxer on Mar 24, 2011

    nice one

  • Kristie Claar on Jul 31, 2011

    awesome work

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