Empty Party

Razorwind on Dec 20, 2011

Tags: bar, drinking, drunk and hot girls, Empty, fast cars, party, prayer, prince, saved, smoking

God’s children don’t belong in bars.

Ash on the table,
Smoke in the air,
Lights swirling,
On empty chairs,

Music bumping blasted loud,
But I’m not moving to the sound,
Dressed up like it’s a special occasion,
Looking for love in the wrong places,

Stupid is as stupid does,
So if I do you I’m dumbing down,
Stepping down from the thrown,
That makes me a prince,
For this drunk and hot girl,
Yeah that makes perfect sense,

You get by on looks but not to far,
Even if you drive the fastest car,
There are only so many places you can go,
But I pray that this world doesn’t take you down

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CA Johnson on Dec 23, 2011
I really like this poem. Sometimes we do find love in the wrong places. Thank you so much for sharing.
Yvhes P. on Dec 28, 2011
very nice poem. thanks for sharing.
ilikep2s on Dec 29, 2011
Great poem!
Saurav Banerjee on Dec 30, 2011
You write really well. There is a beautiful sense of rhythm in your words.
erwinkennythomas on Dec 30, 2011
moving
Razorwind on Dec 30, 2011
Thank you all very much.
mdrkarim7 on Dec 31, 2011
Nice poem and good to read.
V rank on Jan 4, 2012
I love the contrast…
KittyWolfSpirit on Jan 16, 2012
I really think this is beautiful. The idea that looks, possession, and location shouldn’t choose who we fall for whether a one night stand or forever. Beautiful touching words.

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