Poem about a bad day in San Francisco.

rainy day

soup weather afternoon

“end of the line!”

bus driver shouts

making a way home

through the raindrops

wind hustles and blows

freezing skin wet, cold

hot cheese soup waiting

bread comfort food

running rest of the way

from the station to the door

snuggled up and settled in

San Francisco can be a cold place

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  • Cyni1106 on May 19, 2011

    I love hot soup on a cold winter’s night. Nothing better that that mug of soup and an good piece of bread, I’ll be right over. :)

  • jamilhussain on May 20, 2011

    great ..

  • CHIPMUNK on May 20, 2011

    good one

  • The Soul Explorer on May 20, 2011

    Chillax :D

  • HOPE AWAN on May 20, 2011

    Great work

  • 1hopefulman on May 20, 2011

    Excellent poem! So even San Francisco can be a cold place.

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