Dedicated to all my Triond friends, out of sight but not lost.

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When you start writing and no idea comes out,

You can’t help but cursing but need not pout;

When your nice friends were saying  “c’mon, get out”,

And there’s nothing left to say to deserve a shout.

 

When all the good ideas just pass you by,

Your were so lazy to write it out you have to make a sigh;

When everything seems worthless you look up at the sky,

But it was filled with dark gray clouds hanging up so high.

 

When you have to say enough and make a detour,

Thinking life is a destination not an endless tour;

But somewhere along the way the taste turns sour,

When you’ve got to be on your feet and return to scour.

 

Well, For Ken Bultman and Lostash if you’re going, I just hope you’ll find it. For everyone who are staying, let us make the best of everything left to be written. My best regards to each and everyone.

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  • giftarist on Nov 9, 2009

    Indeed endless search.

  • chitragopi on Nov 9, 2009

    Nice one.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 9, 2009

    Thanks for your advice, and hopefully two of them don’t leave here.

  • Jenny Heart on Nov 9, 2009

    If we all search our hearts our minds will find it. Pray for inspiration. It works!

  • Jane Jane on Nov 9, 2009

    thanks.

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Nov 9, 2009

    Thank you for this, it was really helpful because sometimes i feel the same way.

  • AlmaG on Nov 9, 2009

    I’m always at a loss for ideas to write about, but listening to a good song gives me a lot of inspiration…

    Wonderful poem Will ^_^

  • Francois Hagnere on Nov 9, 2009

    That is beautiful, Will. You are such a great friend. As I said before, we have found friendship here. And in turn I will to say each and every: best wishes and all the best! We all work hard to give quality contents, and the friendship we share is so precious to me.
    Love you,
    François

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 9, 2009

    A very nice piece of writing. When I cant make my ideas take shape I usually save them in draft anyway, even if all I have is a heading. I can usually make something of it in the next few days.

  • athena goodlight on Nov 9, 2009

    I can relate. it even happens with composers. You hear a tune in your head while walking, when you get home and start transcribing it, it’s lost forever. With writers, it’s good to have a pen and notepad handy.
    Nice poem, very well expressed.

  • Kairos on Nov 9, 2009

    i think i am now inspired again to write.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 9, 2009

    We have a nice family of writers here. It is so wonderful to have this kind of a platform. Very nice piece. I hope I have enough ideas always..LOL

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 9, 2009

    Those are such beatiful thought and a great help to us all. Good work.

    Christine

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 9, 2009

    Sorry! That such read \’beautiful thoughts\’

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 9, 2009

    Very inspirational write Will! I always have ideas in some way or ohter however;I did like the line to lazy to write it down! Very true sometimes!! I think perhaps they both just need a break, it does get a bit tedious as well as frustrating after a while if you spend too much time commenting and wracking your brains for good ideas. An idea is one thing, a good idea is another. :)

  • Hansika on Nov 10, 2009

    great article

  • papaleng on Nov 10, 2009

    a genuine thought ! you have set an inspiration for us.

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 10, 2009

    You’re so sweet, Will. The search can be endless. All of us are looking for something, that great idea. Though I think what got to Ken and Losty was the horrible glitches within Triond – there is always something gone terribly awry – like having to log in every other minute or photos not uploading. Enjoyed this, Will.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 10, 2009

    Thank you my deep friend well said.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 14, 2009

    Nice poem and good picture. Life is an endless journey.

  • xoxo on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice poem kabayan. I guess our search will never be over but then again there is always hope.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 25, 2009

    As writers we have to keep writing. That means you too, my friend!

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 29, 2009

    Very powerful insightful piece. Awesome work!

  • katelove on Dec 6, 2009

    Nice work, haven’t experience exasperating moments with Triond these days but I know how it feels when you keep uploading yet it doesn’t work. Yet, Triond is a nice place to write and make friends.

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