Transported with dark delight…

Runaway with me into the darkness
Take my hand and submit yourself to me
Trust in me, let go of your bitterness
For I will show you what pleasure could be

Release your sorrows into the heavens
Set it free, let it be a memory
Think of love, let yourself be forgiven
For this desire will give you glory

Hold on to me, don’t ever let me go
Stay forever with in my warm embrace
Let your ecstasy fall like pristine snow
Surround yourself deep with in Eden’s grace

Liberate yourself from all your anguish
For I will evermore keep you ravished

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  • raman13 on Sep 8, 2009

    Interesting

    Keep the good work on

    Best Regards

  • ken bultman on Sep 8, 2009

    I liked this a lot but since enravished isn’t a real word what you’re offering is something ethereal and I’m not certain I’m ready for it. lol. California girls frighten me.

  • agriculi on Sep 8, 2009

    It\’s easier said than done.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 8, 2009

    What a passionate and erotic piece. You have me blushing. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 8, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, if only we could, a very passionate piece of writing as always!!

  • Collette Edwards on Sep 8, 2009

    another great write from the queen of Romance :)

  • Yovita Siswati on Sep 9, 2009

    So strong and passionate. I like the beautiful flow o words.

  • Lostash on Sep 9, 2009

    You just keep ‘em coming don’t you? A very special talent indeed!

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