Entanglement of the flesh…

Two lovers entwined
Their limbs entangled
Like twining vines
Completely ensnared
A sinuous embrace
Spiraling and twisting
Clasping and climbing
Reaching for one another
Clinging desperately to each other
Writhing in unison
Flesh upon skin
In utter harmony
Moving as one
Under the clouds

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  • ken bultman on Dec 27, 2009

    Exciting imagery. I hope it doesn’t rain. Nothing like a sudden cold shower to disentangle twining limbs.

  • Phill Senters on Dec 27, 2009

    Fiery hot! Two lovers entwined. Looks like they wouldn’t care if it did rain.

  • Atanacio on Dec 27, 2009

    you’ve captured the image :)

  • deep blue on Dec 27, 2009

    Limbs entwined like vines’ tendrils ensnared at a branch…Don’t tell me vines are becoming more intimate with a sensual character. Nice style of writing as always. Keeps the blood boil for body warmth.

  • AlmaG on Dec 27, 2009

    Great poem LS :)

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 29, 2009

    W

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 29, 2009

    Why does Ken have to say funny things.LOL. This one is hot and full of passion. A perfect image too :)

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 29, 2009

    Phew. It is getting hot in here

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 29, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, what an imagination, full of passion!

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