An expressionof pain when somebody’s hurting alone.

I.

I’m half a world far away and half a world near

for it’s only my psyche that can only hold you dear

Really wishing that I was there physically

It’s impossible, so this is my entreaty…

II.

The pain you went through, not unimaginable

But the burden placed on your heart reaches my soul

Weighing down the blessings that I was thankful for

Really yearning that I have comforted you more…

III.

All magic of the modern world cannot suffice

Daily mails cannot cover for the sacrifice

The ton of sorrow you’ll endure day in and out

Overwhelming me now that I can only shout…

IV.

Words are abundant but my caress is scarce

And my being is but as far as the stars

Wasted comforting touch that I would have given

Now that a loved one’s soul is trekking to heaven…

V.

I should have been there when that loving hand laid flat

I should have hugged you, but then again I cannot

Should’ve kissed your tears away or cried with you then

Should’ve been there… wishing I was… again and again…

VI.

Caressing your face, only in imagery

Rubbing your back, embracing you closer to me

Yet a peaceful feeling covers me solidly

You know I shared your hurting through this entreaty…

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Comments (12)
  • Majic on Nov 28, 2009

    Oh, such sorrow!
    Well done RF!

  • Mr Ghaz on Nov 29, 2009

    Wonderful and very attractive poem..deep words..I liked it..Thanks for sharing 8)

  • Petalm on Nov 29, 2009

    Very emotional.

  • Unofre Pili on Nov 29, 2009

    As usual,sounds like a classic piece.

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  • Katie Marie on Nov 29, 2009

    Such a hard place when we can\\\’t be physically present with those we love and know are hurting. You expressed it well.

  • papaleng on Nov 29, 2009

    Oh c’mon Mr. romantic, haven’t you move on.. LOL just kidding, another beautiful poem as always.

  • Sourav on Nov 29, 2009

    Very emotional write. Well done.

  • deep blue on Nov 30, 2009

    So passionately crafted. Well done, kabayan.

  • LOVELY HONEY on Dec 2, 2009

  • mishee on Dec 4, 2009

    that is very good. :)

  • Kate Smedley on Dec 9, 2009

    Poignant and emotional poem, very beautiful.

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