A short but sensual poem…please enjoy.

So beautiful she is as she steps from the room,

She brings with her the scent of flowers that bloom.

A warm mist circles and trails her around,

Silently she longs for his two hands now.

Thinking she is alone in an empty house,

Her robe untied she walks throughout.

Her hair glistens so soft and kind,

None other that walked here has been so fine.

With a start she met him midway through.

The lotion was warm his hands were true.

He pulled her in close, face to face,

It had to be the world’s warmest embrace.

Her head on his shoulder he rubbed her back,

Her cares and worries all faded to black.

How long they stood there no one can know,

Entwined in arms, no pains no woes.

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Comments (9)
  • Angela Ohm on Jan 25, 2011

    This is an absolutely beautiful love poem ! Very touching ! Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

    Angela

  • Wizard Brown on Jan 25, 2011

    This is fantastic. Great work.

  • lowellhenderson on Jan 25, 2011

    Thank you guys so much for your wonderful comments. This is what writing is all about.

  • Larry Fish on Jan 25, 2011

    This is one of the most beautiful poems I’ve read on Triond. It should be entered in a poetry contest.

  • Val Mills on Jan 25, 2011

    Nice work here.

  • john smither on Jan 26, 2011

    Beautifully written poetry.

  • Betty Carew on Jan 26, 2011

    Oh for love that takes everything else from the mind. Awesomely beautiful words Lowell, i enjoyed this very much.

  • DarcAngeL on Jan 27, 2011

    wow! that’s a very nice poem. :)

  • Wilbart26 on Jan 28, 2011

    A very nice share of ideas. This article is very much helpful for me since I am only beginning to understand some things. Hoping you will still post such articles so that I can follow you and learn more from you. Have a great day!

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