A twisted relationship poem. Read into it and you will see.

Write my name in the sand and let the tide carry it out to sea,

Speak the words that will make me feel everythings gonna be alright,

Don’t doubt for a moment what could be,

Lay down your suitecase and stay here with me,

I say the things that make you wanna give up and cry,

Your foolish pride and harsh words make me want to die,

Never for a moment would I want you to go away,

So here I am on my knees begging you to stay,

Ill take the abuse and turn the other cheek,

Give in to promises you fail to keep,

Deep inside there is a heart that refuses to break,

Hanging on to your every selfish mistake,

So stay with me, ill make it all up to you,

Open your heart and let me prove,

That im weak enough to endure forever with you.

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  • Maxwell Mannequin on Nov 18, 2009

    very romantic. run with it! haha

  • spiritualgrace30 on Nov 19, 2009

    So romantic, your words embrace me

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 20, 2009

    excellent be positive u will leave a mark on the everlasting sands of TIME GOOD

  • Kakraba Afful on Mar 4, 2010

    An ecstatic, stench of intelligence!

  • MizzJen on Jun 24, 2011

    Very beautiful poem. I like the way you use the words, I don“t know how. But it really touched my heart. Keep it up my friend! (y)

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