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Erotic Play

Darla Cooke on Dec 30, 2009
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Erotic love poem.

We talk and laugh together,

enjoying each other’s company.

You touch my body tenderly,

you rub with delicate strokes.

You tickle my sides playfully,

you kiss with urgent passion.

You lick along my rosy mouth,

suck lightly on my lower lip.

I feel excited and ready,

willing to surrender fully.

You enter my warm wetness,

pump into my moist depths.

The pressure builds rapidly,

eventually we both explode.

We cum with wild abandon,

both feeling satisfied at last.

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  • ceegirl on Dec 30, 2009

    excellent write

  • ceegirl on Dec 30, 2009

    good poetry

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 30, 2009

    In my throat there was a swallow. Did you hear it? Well done.

  • jaysonv on Dec 30, 2009

    nice post..very interesting..

  • Valerie Curtiss on Dec 30, 2009

    ***** poem

  • Kinkyvinyl on Dec 30, 2009

    Really enjoyed this as I am a fan and participator of erotic poetry myself. Well done, very enjoyable.

  • ken bultman on Dec 30, 2009

    Satisfaction.

  • nightcharmer on Dec 30, 2009

    Darla, you should seriously consider writing and publishing your own erotic fiction or poetry collection someday!

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Dec 30, 2009

    Oh Darla, I hope you can cover the cost of my computer as I clicked upon this hottie my key board keys started to feel warm, then hot when they finally melted together. The screen started smoking and caught fire which melted the ice in my glass of tea and then started boiling. Now we must discuss the damages to me lol. I felt as though I was right there actually experiencing this precious moment as I closed my eyes and drifted backwards and broke the back of my chair and bumped my head on the book case behind me causing me to rush off to emergeny for a few stitches. The reading of this poem was so worth the damages to equipment and bodily trauma lol. All kidding aside I really enjoyed your extremely creative composure. Thank You Darla for a Wonderful Journey…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • lillyrose on Dec 30, 2009

    Top notch Darla! beautiful, sensuous poem…Oh yes and a little raunchy! just the way I like them x

  • alc on Dec 30, 2009

    Darla you never seem to let any of us down with your words! Always looking forward to reading more! Thanks for the share!

  • Frederick Zammit on Dec 30, 2009

    I loved your poem as always Darla :)

  • Goodselfme on Dec 30, 2009

    What a knack for this kind of prose you have!

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 30, 2009

    You do have a knack all right.

  • asphaltbetty on Dec 30, 2009

    rephrase third line from the bottom. it doesnt quite flow with the rest :)

  • albert1jemi on Dec 31, 2009

    nice poem happy new year

  • STEVE666 on Dec 31, 2009

    Nicely erotic, Darla!

  • diamondpoet on Dec 31, 2009

    I see you really enjoy turning up the heat. Nice post.

  • Johnny Yuma on Dec 31, 2009

    I thought the third line went perfectly well. After all, you don’t want it to be over before you get started good. Great work Darla!
    Johnny Yuma

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 1, 2010

    Wow! Lots of sexy sizzle in that hot piece. Yummy! Very nice Darla. Good job!

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 1, 2010

    Very Nice….

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