Escape From The Cities (Shadorma)

Jessica Louise on Apr 12, 2011

Tags: acid, acidic, city, crashing, crystalline, dance, dancing, Escape, Jessica, lies, Louise, poem, Poetry, Rain, sea, sparkling

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Two shadormas to create one poem.

Running from
acidic cities
where their clouds
are nothing
but heartless desecration

I’m crashing
into the deep blue
I’m dancing
into the
crystalline sparkling rain
escaping their lies

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Comments (3)

Peace Poet on Apr 13, 2011
This is a very remarkable poem. the poet finds peace with a happy retreat in the world of nature. The best line is ” I’m crashing
into the deep blue”.
CHIPMUNK on May 18, 2011
A great way of writing poetry
mona rastogi on May 18, 2011
good poem

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