A poem is so hard to describe. I always say just take from it what you feel from it.

The words have been said 
And I can’t move on
Your voice in my head 
What went wrong 

 

That question always comes to mind 
But I erase it with what helps me loose track of time 

 

And see your not the ticket for my ride of success 
Just this road that I can’t forget to reminesce 

 

This path has lead me to thousands of dead ends 
So why do I continue why is it so hard to comprehend 

 

You said the words that I’ve been dying to hear
Even after a year. 

 

Its time, its been time, this is the time 
I’m not ready to say what you have burdened me with 

 

Optimism has walked out on me 
And I’m left sitting on the floor 
I can’t take another thought, memory 
So here it goes
Another pill to keep me in my fantasy

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Comments (6)
  • Joie Schmidt on Aug 30, 2009

    Powerful work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Hellotogoodbye on Aug 30, 2009

    That was wonderfully breathtaking.:-)

  • Lucas DiĆ© on Aug 30, 2009

    well done, indeed!

  • Gagandeep on Aug 30, 2009

    That’s some nice stuff, good job!

  • alc on Aug 30, 2009

    This was a terrific write and the picture gives it that extra little push!

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Aug 30, 2009

    Wow! This is an impactful poem. Well done!

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