What I saw in some frost on my car window.

There’s an etching in the frost
of saddened girl and boy.
Their minds are deeply lost
in a goodbye kiss enjoyed.

There’s an etching in the frost
of a single lonely girl.
Her hair is up and tossed
with a ribbon and a curl.

There’s an etching in the frost
of an angel in the snow.
It’s wings are slightly glossed
but eyes are never shown.

There’s an etching in the frost
of a snow white winter’s day.
The car is on defrost
and the etchings melt away.

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Dec 16, 2009

    lovely rhythms and lovely poem

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Dec 17, 2009

    MissLeaDee, Very creative as I too see etchings in the frost at times. I really enjoyed your creative imagination through your magical pen. Thank You for sharing your writing talent with all of us…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • qasimdharamsy on Dec 17, 2009

    Very Nice Poem…

  • Michael Eboh on Dec 17, 2009

    cool cool and cutie poem! I like it!

  • Darla Smith on Dec 17, 2009

    Lovely poem!

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