Dark and romantic.

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I strolled alone through the graveyard

on the night I felt your lethal bite.

You took me back to your lair,

gave me a taste of your blood.

It was sweet like a vintage wine,

as it slid soothingly down my throat.

That night I lost my heart to you,

now we roam the darkness together.

We stalk and feed each night,

stealing the souls of our victims.

We are on an eternal adventure,

one that will last forevermore.

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  • alc on Aug 6, 2009

    I love your writings you are a very creative person especially when it comes to dark topics!!! Great Job!!!

  • ken bultman on Aug 6, 2009

    Another good’n.

  • rizzei on Aug 6, 2009

    oh..lovely..i remember twilight in your piece:)

  • Ramalingam on Aug 6, 2009

    Horrible, but fit into your mood.

  • lh on Aug 6, 2009

    r u a gothic kind

    a lover of demons

    of some kind

    and vampires too

    must love you

    where can one grind
    and one

    like you ever find.

  • Marie Milton on Aug 6, 2009

    A very thrilling piece : )…hehehe…

  • Milton H Peebles III on Aug 6, 2009

    So bitingly good. I can sink my teeth into this one. Yummy.

    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • Mystify on Aug 6, 2009

    Wonderful work Darla,a lot of feeling to it and very creative!

  • rajeev bhargava on Aug 6, 2009

    highly imaginative and entertaining from start to finish. i enjoyed it all.

  • goodselfme on Aug 7, 2009

    well composed with strength.

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Aug 7, 2009

    Very creative and imaginative…and twilight is nearing again.

  • STEVE666 on Aug 7, 2009

    Stephen King don’t write poetry, but if he did…
    Another good one, Darla.

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