Lovers, true and blissful, sharing each others soul.

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Your touch upon my skin

sets you apart

from other men.

My body quakes so

from the desire

ignited within me.

My teeth chatter

when you kiss my neck slow.

Your lips feel sensual

gently teasing a trail

down the back of my neck,

which does wreck

my senses with pleasure

beyond all measure.

With feelings I have never felt before,

you have opened that hidden door

that only you have been able to open.

Waves and waves are most evident

from our shared passion.

Your tongue is succulent

wrapped around mine,

as we move in time.

We are coiled together into a knot,

working toward every shot

which is the mainstay

of the game,

as I breathlessly scream out your name,

and do the same.

Joining my lover

under the cover

in a state of euphoric bliss

and is tenderly ended with a kiss.

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  • jimbob1 on Jan 14, 2010

    DB…What a powerful and beautifully written piece of romantic erotica…I absolutely love this lovely masterpiece of lierary art. The visual are very appropriate for this one as well…A perfect 10 out of 10…Thanks so much for taking the time to compose and share this. Outstanding job. Am so grateful at being able to be the first to comment on this “euphoric bliss”

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 14, 2010

    I recently discovered you, Barbara the Dame
    I’m so very, very glad I came across your name
    Erotica is something we cannot deny
    It’s not enough to pretend that we may be quite shy
    Every one of us feels heat from the words you provide
    The feelings run deep, so deeply inside
    I leave you with thanks for the pictures you paint
    You’ll have to excuse me, as I think I might faint !!

    Wonderfully erotic and sensual. Great write Barbara.

    Thanks

    Aldrin

  • Midie on Jan 17, 2010

    So detail, it like me watching a passionate love scene, so hot.

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