Eve of Concernment

DA Cournean on Jul 25, 2009

Tags: Eve, Haiku, Hope, love, mass, Poetry

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In times of darkness and despair, keep the faith. Tomorrow may yield a brighter day…

Eve of concernment

Mass conjecture unfolding

Lo! Luminous morn.

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Comments (16)

ken bultman on Jul 25, 2009
Beautiful picture to compliment a well composed haiku. Or vice versa, I suppose.
George W Whitehead on Jul 25, 2009
Nice one, DA.
clay hurtubise on Jul 25, 2009
Good job.
Thanks,
Clay
lindalulu on Jul 25, 2009
Beautiful!
Ruby Hawk on Jul 25, 2009
I like it,
rutherfranc on Jul 25, 2009
a fresh feeling after reading…
Mayur01 on Jul 26, 2009
Beautiful picture to compliment a well composed haiku. Or vice versa, I suppose.
gaby7 on Jul 27, 2009
Very powerful! Keep them coming DA!
Juancav on Jul 30, 2009
Helpful message.
kate smedley on Jul 31, 2009
Beautiful haiku and picture.
Debra. on Jul 31, 2009
Beautiful Haiku with a picture to emphasize it’s conclusion! Very nicely done, Deb!
giftarist on Aug 16, 2009
Liked it
novelist on Sep 4, 2009
A very nice poem. The best way to leave this world is via your slumber. The world is getting closer to the edge because of human indifference.
diamondpoet on Sep 25, 2009
I want to wake up every morning with that image in my head. Thank you for sharing.
Jamie Myles on Nov 30, 2009
lovely haiku with an excellent choice of oicture.
Jamie Myles on Nov 30, 2009
Sorry for the typo. meant to type (picture)

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