Evening Breeze

Atanacio on Nov 8, 2010

Just a relaxing day.

Sweet dreams filled her head,

she bathed and lay in her bed,

with her eyes closed,

heavy hands,

with soft commands,

dipped into the most subtle

essence of oil,

smoothed her back and arms

with a light touch,

she didn’t have to say much,

a drowsy contentment drifted

in with the evening breeze,

time sifted,

angels filled their sleeves,

with her dreams,

gentleness streams,

as she rested the side of her head

in the crook of her naked arm,

the need was fed,

and angels filled her room

causing no harm,

and the much needed rest came soon.

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Comments (12)

albert1jemi on Nov 8, 2010
well written
yes me on Nov 8, 2010
Very nice Frank, like the change of theme did she like her rub down then? he he cheers
Guy Hogan on Nov 8, 2010
Ah, to sleep. Yes, to dream.
Evelyn M Carter on Nov 8, 2010
Wow Frank! Intense yet somehow beautiful. Really nice post. Thanks for sharing…

…she could have been dying or napping…thoughtful write…
pearl2010 on Nov 8, 2010
Good entry. Wonderful dream.
PSingh1990 on Nov 8, 2010
Nice Share.
PARAM on Nov 8, 2010
Nice one….

thanks for share.
Anuradha Ramkumar on Nov 9, 2010
A wonderful poem.
lovestar2010 on Nov 9, 2010
thank you for this great poetry..
do same for me
LoveDoctor on Nov 9, 2010
A nice sensual poem. The skin is so highly sensitive that it is able to transmit and receive messages and feelings conveyed through the hands. Such messages nourish not only the physical body, but the mind and emotions as well. Feather touches lightly on the arms and sensitive areas of the body are not only playful, but arousing to the senses. Nice share. keep going. do the same for me. LOL
Ruby Hawk on Nov 9, 2010
Well done, friend.
Lady Sunshine on Nov 10, 2010
Wow Frank. I did a double take. Wasn’t expecting you to write this. A nice change of pace. Did your girlfriend inspire this? lol.

And my God, albert1jemi wrote a different comment!! Pigs must be flying. lmao.

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