A poem about a couple’s evening picnics and how much it means to the writer.

Warm autumn peaches, just a little overripe, 
And their juices, spill onto the blanket while the stars
Tan our skin with their shine. 
You whispered, calmly (subtly) “could you be more perfect?” 
            -I could have-.

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