As a poet, people have teased and mocked me over Facebook. I feel bad in some cases for these people because they don’t know what they’re missing. Anyhow, I decided to look into that old-school poem of "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue" I decided to make a mirror of it through that style in the lines and stanzas. The structure is more or less in the poem. I’ll leave it to the reader. Comments are open.

Everlasting

Blood is Red
Faces are Blue

Your Tears Are Salty
Your Ending is Amazing.

Vengeance is Sweet
Sweeter than You.

Your Tears are Sour
Same as your Heart.

Your Love is Impure
Just Like your Soul.

Your Dreams are my Nightmares
Your Heaven is my Hell.

My Mind is Sick
Sicker than You.

My Tongue is Thirsty
My Blade is Hungry.

My Pain is Everlasting
Just like your Hatred.

Your Loving Arms
Are my Crown of Thorns.

My Love was Impure
Just like your Lies.

My Pain is Everlasting
Just like your Hatred.

 

 

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  • Budy236 on Nov 21, 2011

    I love this! It’s aggressive and rather angry, but it’s REAL! Personally, I think it’s rather inspirational.

  • CHIPMUNK on Nov 23, 2011

    A beautifully written piece of work

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