Every Once in Awhile

Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Jul 25, 2010

Tags: eventuality, Prudence. Opportunist

Prudence?

Every once in awhile
there lives strangely enough
Something that breathes
and comes to be in the gallery of a touch or a smile
that makes it real tough
to say no

Every once in awhile
there oddly becomes
A shift in the pattern of peace
And the preponderant sum?
Is friend vs Foe

Every once in awhile
Once in a great while
Comes beauty that beguiles
A unique way, a special style
and I cant say no

No I cant say no

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webseowriters on Jul 26, 2010
nicely written
Tina Cassello on Jul 26, 2010
I do like this, but I believe it should be awhile not two words as you have it.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Jul 27, 2010
Tina, you are right. I will make the change. WebSEO thanks for commenting and stopping by.
giftarist on Jul 27, 2010
Pretty cool write.
ShellyB1875 on Aug 6, 2010
You are using the correct form of “a while”. A while is a construction meaning “an indefinite period of time”. Awhile is an adverb used after a verb. Its definition is “after a short period of time”. No need for change Jerry.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Aug 6, 2010
Thanks everyone for their input!

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