A murderer facing the death penalty.

Hatred created,

as the family waited,

the police and the deputies had approached,

almost as if they were coached,

once more across the same stale ground,

slowly, silently,

the murderer passed them with his head down,

his hands were gripping a stack

of rolled up court papers behind his back,

nothing was said, nothing heard,

no one spoke, not even a curse word,

there was no eye contact,

but he felt them, and that was a fact,

only the victims’ voices rattled

down the long corridor,

reality battled,

as the violent crimes were told and retold,

the death sentence, sold then resold,

but finally, everything looked better in the cold,

a priest shook his head,

as he brought up the rear,

he was there to pray for the dead,

but would do it without shedding a tear.

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Comments (9)
  • Roe2115 on Dec 29, 2010

    Another great post.

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 29, 2010

    Sometimes there is no justice.

  • willie wondka on Dec 29, 2010

    great

  • yes me on Dec 29, 2010

    Sometimes the bad guy gets a prayer… even if its to thank the powers that be that he is no more… a good bit of imagery in this Frank cheers

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 29, 2010

    A very dark and well written poem.

    Christine

  • lillyrose on Dec 29, 2010

    You are the top expert on this kind of poem! I really, really, really love all you have to offer!

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 29, 2010

    Nice picture of Lilyrose. lol.

    A very dark poem. Good work.

  • shakugan123 on Dec 29, 2010

    you can be a novel writer, the soul of the poem is dark but impressive.

  • PSingh1990 on Dec 29, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

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