Poem #29 for the man I’ve been loving for a year!

I see you everywhere, oh! yes,

I see you at school, I see you at home; even when I rest.

I see you everywhere, indeed,

I see you in my head; you may be everything I need.

I see, you’re everywhere to me.

You stay in my eyes after you leave, and the warmth from my blamket as I sleep, it’s from you that I receive.

I see you in the morning as I yawn and close my eyes, I see you on every cloud and when the sun begins to shine.

I see you in the mirror as I wipe the steam away, even when I let you go! a part of you just stays.

Sometimes your image hurts and brings me so much pain, other times might as well give in; your love I can’t attain.

In my world you are ubiquitous— seemingly just everywhere,

I discovered something new; and now is when I’m scared.

It’s not that I’m in love with you, no, I knew that before,

it’s something deeper that I see; that I cannot ignore.

As I brushed the eye shadow gently on my lid, I noticed something in the mirror; that I never did.

I knew I saw you everywhere; even in my lies, I just didn’t know; you were inside my eyes.

And now I know that you are there, I want to see you all the time,

and when I give the mirror a stare, it makes me feel as if you’re mine.

If that’s amazing; this is better, your eyes is my reflection and I want to stay in them, forever.

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  • Stan Wilson on Feb 14, 2010

    very loving and lovely poem,really enjoyed this reading…choice….

  • J J Neuman on Feb 14, 2010

    Wow! This poem was a trip down memory lane for me, from many years ago. Enjoy the ride…you’ll find out that not everyone gets a ticket.

  • J J Neuman on Feb 14, 2010

    Wow! This poem was a trip down memory lane for me, from many years ago. Enjoy the ride…you\’ll find out that not everyone gets a ticket.

  • deep blue on Feb 14, 2010

    Yes that happens when you’re in love. You are at the spell hence looking at the one same face amidst the crowd.

  • Peter Cimino on Feb 14, 2010

    This is just awesome! Loved it!!

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 14, 2010

    Very Nice one….

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Feb 15, 2010

    Thank you, dear friends, it means alot to me all of your sincere comments. I usually underestimate my writing skills

  • AlmaG on Feb 20, 2010

    The last line is like Katy Perry\\\’s song \\\”Thinking of you\\\”… it\\\’s lovely :)

  • richardpeeej on Feb 21, 2010

    nice poem and sweet words ‘I see you on every cloud’-very imaginative.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Feb 21, 2010

    Awesome and beautifully written.

  • Jpower on Mar 8, 2010

    very interesting

  • drelayaraja on Apr 5, 2010

    Nicely written poetry.

  • sasuke191 on Jun 6, 2010

    A very cute poem.. :)

  • samsons1 on Jun 7, 2010

    very good, well written…

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