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Excitement

ceegirl on Oct 27, 2009
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Everybody need excitement in their life.

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A party to get loose a little to dismiss the tension

Too win something to make you jump for joy

Just enjoy the things you want to do.

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Go to church praise the Lord

That’s all the excitement you will need in life.

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  • chantell on Oct 27, 2009

    Great write.

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Oct 27, 2009

    nice write, you say so much in just a few words! that takes skills you know.. you have skills! just saying.. :)

  • diamondpoet on Oct 27, 2009

    Nice write you are speaking loud and clear.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 27, 2009

    lovely poem. good job

  • ken bultman on Oct 27, 2009

    Don’t worry, be happy.

  • Snooky on Oct 27, 2009

    Just you wait until excitement is getting a new set of dentures
    LOL !

  • Mean lean gangster on Oct 27, 2009

    I liked it!

  • alc on Oct 27, 2009

    Thanks for a great article!

  • cebuanaeyez on Oct 27, 2009

    Beautiful message!

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 27, 2009

    Anohter lovely write with a wonderful message!Good stuff!

  • Tom Silex on Oct 27, 2009

    thanks for writing a poem on this page that doesn’t rime.

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 27, 2009

    Beautiful poem.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 27, 2009

    Agree!

  • Will Dee on Oct 28, 2009

    Simple straight forward message. Nice

  • wonder on Oct 28, 2009

    A true one.

  • Ron Fields on Oct 28, 2009

    Right on!

  • Lord Banks on Oct 28, 2009

    Cool as !

  • iimhere2 on Oct 28, 2009

    you seem to be able to make a point with only couple words i havent learned that yet

  • razumtina on Oct 28, 2009

    Great writing!

  • goindia on Oct 29, 2009

    This is something really great.

  • Dr Robert Brignall on Oct 30, 2009

    Short but sweet. Illustrations dovetail nicely with the words. I think I love you. RB

  • bobbyt on Oct 30, 2009

    I try to keep excitement in my life.

  • Pete Macinta on Nov 4, 2009

    I like praising the Lord!

  • lillyrose on Nov 5, 2009

    nice one

  • Christyan S. on Nov 5, 2009

    Fantastic !

  • Midie on Dec 5, 2009

    I like having fun. Nicely done.

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