Exhausted!

Lady Sunshine on Aug 4, 2011

Tags: cat, collapses, cute, exhausted, hot, Kitty, Maru, neko, play, summer, tail, tummy

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Poor little kitty. Looking so silly. Supposed to be a limerick. Now I’m being silly. LOL.

It is a hot, summer day
As I scamper about and play
My body soon collapses
Exposing my tummy to the masses
As my tail twitches away!

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Comments (8)

pattiann on Aug 4, 2011
Good poem and cute cat, before my dog was dognapped, she would lay in her bed on her back with her legs sticking straight out. My mom said that was to cool off.
Good job
Starpisces on Aug 4, 2011
wonderful limerick, cute kitten.
papaleng on Aug 4, 2011
cute poem for a cute kitten.
Christine Ramsay on Aug 4, 2011
That is so cute and I love the limerick too.
PruandMe on Aug 4, 2011
made me smile
beingwell on Aug 4, 2011
She looks so tired! I wonder from doing what?hahahah
Shirley Shuler on Aug 7, 2011
Hi Lady Sunshine, lol, if only I could lay out like that in the hot summer heat.
Erin Miller on Aug 19, 2011
That Maru cat is so adorable! Love your limerick too.

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