We all feel lonely or had a loved one leave us. I’m sure many can relate to this because this is how most of us feel.

Lost and forgotten
Betrayed and
I’ve been through it to many times to know
That I am being misled
The remnant, reluctant, reminiscence of my soul is left here as you leave me
Trashed and scattered
I sit here, awaiting my punishment
To only find out I am to be exiled…
Now I sit here across the windowsill
Remembering the days that once were
It would seem like as if it were just yesterday
When I thought I knew who you were
But at the snap of my fingers it all slips away
Now just knowing that it was once there
Will have to satisfy me
Because you don’t love me
2 words its over
1 look its pain
No parody can fix this
I am just happy that I am able to breathe and your not

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  • michelle on May 14, 2007

    i haven’t lost anyone yet, but i imagine that it must be hard, but its good to know that there are people out there that care and feel the same way you do.

  • Roxanne on May 14, 2007

    SUPERB job.

  • LostLoverxXXx on May 14, 2007

    Hey, i was very touched by your poem. It really felt the way i feel right now. I look forward to some more of your work

  • unw4nt3d on May 14, 2007

    wow warren
    you wrote this?! =|
    whoaaaa my best friend is actually goooood^^
    LoL haha =P
    go warren go! =D
    LETS GO WRITE A STORY!
    LoL hahaha ><
    good *old* times =)

  • theLAYDEE . on May 14, 2007

    =O
    awwwwwn , goooooddd job !

  • Koii on May 26, 2007

    Outstanding job old chum. One day ye can be a top-class writer like myself. Tally hoe. Farewell dear chap.

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