I think you missed the point.

Explanation Please

 

 

 

For those of you that missed the beat

I say goodbye to you I will not repeat

I need to explain to friend and foe

The underplaying message

So you will know

It is about constipation

I am sure that you know

That pain and agony

That once it grabs you and

Does not want to let go

Even a Dr’s pill

Could not

Cure that ill

I knew good old Mom

Would have something

That will

So it wasn’t about a man

Don’t have one on hand

Was about nature not

Properly working

And the exhaustive pain

That was left lurking

To those that read it

I you do appreciate

So many missed the point

I just had to renovate

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Comments (9)
  • pattiann on Jul 24, 2010

    Good piece. Keep up the great work.

  • Guy Hogan on Jul 24, 2010

    I think we all get the point now. And it hurts.

  • Aiswarya T Anish on Jul 24, 2010

    very nice

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 24, 2010

    Hmmmmmh.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Jul 24, 2010

    Point ye not the directions for a blind man.

  • john tugano on Jul 27, 2010

    I got it..

  • Tulan on Jul 29, 2010

    LOL, got it,

  • Goodselfme on Jul 30, 2010

    Fun read and well penned. Thank you!

  • mkd1788 on Aug 1, 2010

    you expressed nicely…good one..and i am came back in the triond family..

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