Do you every feel your under to much pressure to be perfect that it just gets to much and you feel like your going to explode? Please feel free to leave comments.

All these voices nagging in my ear
Can’t ever get peace in my head
Everything is getting to much
I just want to end it all
There’s to much to do
And not enough time to do it all
There’s to much pressure
To be perfect
For everything to be immaculate
It’s like I’m going around in circles
Over and over
Nothings ever good enough
The pressure’s building
I need to release it
I’m going to explode.

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  • jrabraham on May 4, 2011

    Being perfect is BORING :)

  • Cuissade Mission on May 4, 2011

    Please don’t allow the needs and or wants of others to dim your light. Be true to yourself and strive to stay righteous and balanced.

  • Martin Kloess on May 5, 2011

    very good

  • shermaen on May 5, 2011

    it only shows that we are human=)

  • shermaen on May 5, 2011

    it only shows that we are human =)

  • arielcnacion on May 6, 2011

    give room for mistakes. it’s another way you learn. =)

  • Stable on May 6, 2011

    I know what you mean – I think a lot of people must feel like they could explode. Good post.

  • Aeres on May 7, 2011

    there is beauty in imperfection , strength in weakness and bravery in fear ……be your own Personal Jesus……you don’t owe anyone more than you are willing to give

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