Exude

ceegirl on Jul 30, 2011

Tags: beneath, casual, confidence, exude, feelings, inside, rumbling, surface

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My feeling are rumbling inside.

I have a lot on my mind.

I exude a casual confidence,

but inside my feelings are

rumbling beneath the surface.

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Comments (8)

The Quail 1957 on Jul 30, 2011
Very nice!
megamatt09 on Jul 30, 2011
Very good work.
Oversoul on Jul 30, 2011
Short..but beautifully written…Thanks for sharing, beloved. Peace be unto you–even as we speak.
pattiann on Jul 30, 2011
nice!
Jenilia12 on Jul 31, 2011
good share.
richardpeeej on Jul 31, 2011
Thanks for sharing my friend it is lovely….
johnbee79 on Aug 4, 2011
Stay cool!
Aeres on Aug 14, 2011
again, to the point ….good stuff

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