Changing the foot steps and direction of your future.

I close my eyes,

but none too wise,

how things came to be

just what you see.

Drifting further away

each and every day.

Why you say?

I wish I knew,

but I haven’t a clue.

My mind is in a whirlwind of emotion

trying to come up with a single notion.

Overtaken with a weakened spirit.

The beating of my heart I do hear it.

I open my eyes

intent on being wise,

desperate to make a change

before the dream totally dies.

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  • dino renaldo on Nov 29, 2010

    good poem

  • mitchey179 on Nov 29, 2010

    Very nice. I enjoyed this one.

  • jimbob1 on Nov 29, 2010

    DB…this is an incredible poem about searching for the seemingly elusive answer in a relationship…hope you find it before the trail gets too cold…I like this one and voted to say so…thanks and take care

  • alvinwriter on Nov 29, 2010

    Beautifully done!

  • alvinwriter on Dec 1, 2010

    Nice to read this!

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